Have you every seen paintings or drawings my artists who work in a highly realistic style? Like you can hardly tell the different between their oil paintings and a photograph? What’s the point? Part of what makes art interesting are the brushes strokes, the way the colors and shapes, light and shade are interpreted. Most classically great art reveals a lot, and suggests the presences of the artist. Think of Van Gogh. The memory of the man, his vision, is locked into every canvas. Your prose should reveal your character in the same way. So how does Louise experience rain on a Monday morning as she drives?
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